英语书面表达

[ 建议信 ] [ Suggestion Letter ]

假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。 信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这 让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议 信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。建议内容：

1. 不要灰心，保持好的心态； 2. 上课认真听讲； 3. 与同学老师多用英语交流； 4. 阅读英语读物；

注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

第一步 ： 审题 （ 养成审题的习惯 ） 如何审题：

思考的问题 样题分析 第几人称？（ person ） 第一人称 体裁是什么？ 书信 主题是什么 (topic) 对英语学习给出建议 什么时候发生的？ ( 时态 ) 一般现在时 (when)

Dear Li Hua,

You have asked me for my advice on how to learn English well. Here are my some suggestions.

Firstly, don' t lose your heart. Secondly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Thirdly, you can speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. What's more, it's good idea to read English books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes.

Yours,

xxx

Dear Li Hua, You have asked me for my advice on how to learn English well. Here are my some suggestions. Firstly, don' t lose your heart. Secondly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Thirdly, you can speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. What's more, it's good idea to read English books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes.

表明意图

提出建议

表明希望 Yours, xxx

三段式：

建议信

写信的意图

提出建议，给出理由 表明希望

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Dear Li Hua,

You have asked me for my advice on how to learn English well. Here are some suggestions. Firstly, don' t lose your heart. Secondly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Thirdly, you'd better speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. What's more, it's good idea to read English books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes.

Yours, xxx

建议信常用句式

第一段： Purpose and Problems 我很高兴收到你的来信询问关于 ... 的意见。 You have asked me for my advice on how to… I’m glad to receive your letter, asking for my advice on how to ... I've received your letter, saying... 我的建议如下： Here are some suggestions for you. My suggestions are as follows.

第二段： Suggestions 过渡语：层次分明 First/ Firstly/ First of all... Second/ Secondly... Besides/ In addition/ What's more... Finally/ lastly ...

it would be a good idea if... 表达建议常用语： why don't you... ? you should... you'd better ..., because...